Do you mind if I clean up your latest version, and remove some unnecessary info?
Making manual transfer section easier to follow for less technical readers
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Do you mind if I clean up your latest version, and remove some unnecessary info?
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Hi Chris,
You can proceed using your best judgement about what to do.
Hi Chris, You can proceed using your best judgement about what to do. -
I've approved the rewrite, but I have not marked the latest revision as ready for localization. I think we can look at ways to simplify the article before marking it as RFL.
Thanks for your hard work, kenptr! :)
I've approved the rewrite, but I have not marked the latest revision as ready for localization. I think we can look at ways to simplify the article before marking it as RFL. Thanks for your hard work, kenptr! :) -
Hi Chris,
I may have further time to help out with rewrite activities later in the year. I see the simplification discussion is coming up with good ideas.
Best, Ken
Hi Chris, I may have further time to help out with rewrite activities later in the year. I see the simplification discussion is coming up with good ideas. Best, Ken